kristachouinard

Hello! I like the story line in this, I really do. One comment I have is that some parts were just too wordy. Maybe you could fix that by shortening ...

A world of fame and fortune, a world of trials and vicory. A world with every happy ending, a world with success and fulfillment. Hi there! I really liked this ...

Hi there! Well, I think this is a great poem, I'll start by saying that, but of course there is always room for work, granted, I don't think this poem ...

Hello! First off, this is the second post/thread of haiku's i've read today, and I think I've been inspired to try some of my own :wink: Yes, that means I ...

I loved this poem! I agree that the organization of the poem might do better in shorter lines like Maki Chan suggested, but even so I feel like I got ...

Hey :) First off, I want to say that I love Romances, and so this won my heart already. I actually just posted a poem of my own where every ...

Hi there :) I see that some people have already talked to you about the length of lines, and I was actually going to say that I like them the ...