krazywriter

Hilarious. Totally hilarious. Throwing food, tripping each other, running and hiding, getting thrown in the pool... You really got this one going. Is this story part of something? I know ...

I like your poem. I'm not entirely sure I understand it, though. The narrator mentions liking the dark and disliking the light, but by the end is refusing to enter ...

Hi! Just a few more pointers for you. I noticed you have a few problems with the football game. I was wondering how the opposing team could score three points ...

Nice poem! I like your format. It's also cool how the last stanza ties into the first by using similar descriptions. You set the stage with a little girl who ...

Your story is going pretty well so far. I've read the other parts and would consider this a good read. The pronunciation guide was a good idea. I like knowing ...

Wow. You have quite a creative entry here. It sounds so professional. I like how you used unusual terms for measurements. The key was helpful, too. The part at the ...