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Thanks so much!

Thanks everyone. Just to be clear, Corren and the guards are human. I don't think that was clear in the story. I used a lot of simalies with birds, so ...

I agree that the last sentence isn't the best... but I really like the poem itself. It's very emotional. Great job!

This was amazing! I love the writing style, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep writing!

Thanks everybody!

Thanks everybody!

First off, what's a movie house clock? It was interesting and I liked the twist at the end. Keep writing!