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Also, if you're curious about Naomi. The kitsune can act like a succubus and feed on the energy of men or nature. she's also a nogitsune--an unruly kitsune who acts ...

It was. However, sometimes, it does come out the way you expect.

Yeah, this wasn't my best chapter.

humans are naturally selfish and do what they can to survive to a certain degree. while altruism is important when it comes to helping your fellow man, it is important ...

Thanks for the review. I have trouble with the show not tell when writing stories.

It's hard to "show" it. I always get complaints that I also tell and not show however, I'm going to fix that. Physical stamina Rose possesses Herculean strength. it's a ...

Oh yeah. chapter 1 of Magician's wars had been published, by the way.

Also, sorry about that. I was trying to make Rose act and look more like a tomboyish rebel to fit her personality before she left for school and change into ...

Well, I did mention a jacket. maybe, I should mention longer pants.

thanks for the review. I think when using teleportation, I doubt you can get much exercise from it as it folds space-time to allow the user to travel without moving. ...

Yeah, when I wrote this chapter, I didn't really pay attention when I was writing the dialogue because I was juggling my stories and college work. the shower thing might ...

yeah, I can se that now and I really need to work on that.

Sorry if this response seems a little confrontational. I'm aware that there are certain things this chapter is lacking and not enough character development. however, from reading your review, I ...

Also, with chapter 1, I changed Jake's last name from Yu to Nanase.

You assuming the title was about those otherkin was wrong as it refers to mythological otherkin like elves, goblins, demons, etc. The story is set in Arcadia, in North America, ...