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Sorry. I was texting all of that on my phone.

That%u2019s because Michael is still naive. Despite being a knight, he is still young and is still new to knighthood (in hindsight, I should have addressed that in the first ...

Thank you for the review and for the tips. To answer your question of why this chapter seemed seemingly pointless, this was originally intended to be a prologue but became ...

Also, I might have accidentally removed spring and the part following "sky's twilight" when I was doing some editing.

Thank you for the review. I took some of the grammatical and spelling errors you pointed out and have fixed much of the problem in the manuscript. However, I will ...

thanks for the review and I hop you will be around when chapter 2 and 3 come out.

It's not that he is going to war, but more like leaving a war with horrible memories. this will be revealed in the second chapter.

Thank you for the help and I suggest you read the previous chapters to get a better understanding of what's going on.

A/N: Hey, guys. This is Kman134. This is just another attempt at creating a fantasy story and I am not sure if this is any good. Hopefully, it might be ...

Thanks for the review. Chapter 4 and 5 are suppose to be third-person omniscient while the first three are meant to be in first person and focusing on Genji's perspective. ...

A/N: Hey, everyone. This is Kman134. Unlike the other chapters, this one is longer as I wanted to fill in some important parts of the story as much as possible ...

Thanks for pointing out the grammar. it's hard to keep track of it of it, especially when Microsoft word doesn't tell you or when you don't have an editor.

Also, chapter 4 has been posted

Also, Chapter 4 has been posted

Here's the fourth chapter where Gabrielle and Genji test the length of their powers while the master mind operating the shadow people is revealed. We also see Claire tearing at ...