kman134

I am sorry, but there is nothing in here but an author's note. Is there some sort of error or is this a joke? I don't mean to offend you, ...

That's it! That's all you've got! I mean, come on, I've read shorter stories than this, but this is just ridiculous!

Okay, Deanie, to clear things up, I AM trying to make it like a manga/anime/comic than a novel. Sorry about the missing letters, I don't have microsoft word. So, it's ...

I'll send you the other chapters.

how was it boring?

Sorry about that, I was just lazy with the beginning and didn't feel like describing it. Also, the reason why no one reacted to the demon thing is because Jake ...

You're welcome. :)

This poem is very teary as it is filled with love and sorrow. A person devoted to one's love for another is still rare in reality and this poem brings ...

Because, since they are the Occult Club and are magic user, except for Elizabeth being the demon princess, it would be more of a normal thing for them, or something ...

Also, if you read previous chapters, you'll find out why none of the main characters reacted to the existence of Demons.

thanks and, also, if you read the first chapter, you would see Jake's reaction when he first saw a demon.

Hey, Leo, this is Kman134 and I'm here to say that I like this story. I can see the use of realism and strong vocabulary in each sentence and paragraph. ...

Thanks for the comment. I already have chapter 2 posted.

Thanks for the review and thanks for the corrections. read the first chapter, it'll tell you more.

I like the first part of the story how the dialogue for the characters is perfect and how emotional the sentences were. The grammar and spelling is okay. I like ...