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Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Chapter 1
Okay, everything that you've just said was completely out of line! If you want to be a complete jerk about my light novel skills, then that means you've never read ...
Dec 20, 2013 - Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Prologue Dec 19, 2013
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Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Prologue
Look, dude, you can dis Akira all you like, but I still haven't finish him, yet. Besides, I'm trying to make this like a shonen light novel, building up the ...
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Re: Just how i feel about this.....
"That which does not kill you, makes you stronger."-- Friedrich Neitzsche
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Chapter 1
Sorry if the story is too descriptive and have convenient plots. These are habits I've been trying to break, but they keep coming back. The rest from "I almost forgot! ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Prologue
thanks
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Prologue
That's okay, I was thinking of using his name as a running gag where people would comment on how his name is a woman's name and how Akira tries to ...
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Chapter 1
Thank you for the review and thank you for the observation when it came to errors. also, just to clarify, the main character, Kita Akira, is a boy since he's ...
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Re: Wars.
I can see the message you are trying to send. War may bring complete destruction or could bring peace in the aftermath. It can be used for a cause or ...
Dec 15, 2013 -
Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Prologue
Technically, Kita is his last name while Akira is his first name, which is a unisex name when it comes from the people of Japan. I can now see how ...
Dec 15, 2013 - Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Prologue Dec 14, 2013
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Re: Still falling down the Waterfalls
thank you very much.
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Re: Who are you speaking to?
This is an extremely short story and it's hard to write a review for this. I'm sorry if I might've offend you in some way, but this is just my ...
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Re: Still falling down the Waterfalls
This poem seems to be very existential and tends to question about life and the things we wouldn't expect in the future, but that is just my opinion on the ...
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Re: don't let the sky go dark on me.
This poem shows tragedy with a hint of Logos. It has a bit of an alluring effect on me. It somehow reminds me of the story of the Great Gatsby, ...
Dec 14, 2013
