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also, the new chapters have been updated.

the new chapter has been updated.

Thanks for the advance. At least this chapter explains Mishima's bizarre seemingly superhuman strength, though.

yeah, sorry, i kept getting complaints about people saying i "show not tell" a lot. so, i was trying to be as careful about it, but i might have messed ...

thank you.

yeah, that's a problem with one person narration. luckily, in chapter 3, there's more pronouns in it.

you do know Mishima's a boy right?

if you read chapter 1, you get to read what happened to the guy who got abducted by aliens.

Yeah, Mishima is like Lois Lane or Lana Lang who is analytical, but is still oblivious that Clark Kent is Superman, and Kawaii Wonder is like Supergirl crossed with Carol ...

i fixed much of the problems that you pointed out.

since my story is suppose to be animesque, there are a lot of anime tropes. for example, the bloody nose is a common anime trope where if someone is sexually ...

it's good. it's very insightful and analytical. I know Keya is a bit shallow, but i wanted her to start off as naive and a little conceited because she's of ...

Did you read chapter one?

Keya's healing abilities are one of the small aspects of her powers. in the first chapter and others, she has more than one powers such as summoning lighting and fire. ...

in the world of Ashura, crystal balls act more like communicators.