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Kali Lennon

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1, Part 1 Goodbye, Sarah

    Oh, never mind, Tigeraye, I don't think I did mention the purse skimming through this again...whoops.

    Sat Nov 14, 2015 3:02 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1, Part 1 Goodbye, Sarah

    Tigeraye, thank you for your review! I should probably drop of few hints that Ronnie is a girl. Maybe I could refer to her messing with her hair or makeup ...

    Sat Nov 14, 2015 3:00 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 2, Part 2

    Wow, your comment means a lot! Thank you so much for the compliments :)

    Sun Nov 01, 2015 9:04 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: salt-wood

    Correction up above^ I meant to say "you carve your hand out OF wood," changing "from" to "out." Sorry about that- caps on the wrong word.

    Wed Oct 14, 2015 10:11 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1.2 Nice to Meet You

    Thank you tigeraye, I appreciate your honesty! :)

    Mon Oct 12, 2015 4:03 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1.2 Nice to Meet You

    Hi there, and thank you for the review! I know this story may come off as confusing at first. I want the reader to believe it's more of a love ...

    Sat Oct 10, 2015 3:19 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Regrets

    Thank you!!

    Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:59 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Regrets

    Thank you for the advice!

    Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:59 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Regrets

    Okay, how do I separate my stanzas? I don't write a lot of poetry, but whenever I do, the stanzas don't appear separated when I publish!

    Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:51 am
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: From Stars to the Fireplace

    oohhh. Wow, I'm sorry ha ha! It really seemed like it was meant to be stacked haikus.

    Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:23 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1.1: Nice To Meet You

    Thanks for the review! Sorry for my late response!

    Fri Oct 02, 2015 10:53 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1.2 Nice to Meet You

    Please feel free to critique me, give me advice, tell me things you love/loathe, etc. Feedback is appreciated!

    Fri Oct 02, 2015 3:21 am
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: day i was born

    You're welcome. I didn't realize the use of uncapitalization was intentional, so just ignore that part in my review :)

    Wed Sep 30, 2015 10:21 pm
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: His Name Is Andrew.

    Will do! :)

    Wed Sep 30, 2015 10:16 pm
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: The Bunny's Love

    You're welcome :)

    Wed Sep 30, 2015 2:05 am


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