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Re: The Tests of Confucious
I like that you did lots of show not tell. I also liked that you used Confucianism very well in your story. I wonder if explained what was happening a ...
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Re: The way of Buddha
I liked that you gave a good story line and that that it was interesting. I also liked that your story might have tied in to Jacob's story because they ...
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Re: The Pottery
I like your plot and your story line.This was a goo reed.-jack
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: family travels
Hi Jacob its jack I liked how your story had a good plot and a good lenth.
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The way of Buddha
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Re: The Rebellious Confucian
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Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The Rebellious Confucian
Wow this is good story, but I wonder if you could have gone in to detail a little bit more.-jack
Mar 11, 2016