kirstybree

It's a decent poem, but it's nothing more than that to me really. It seems as if it's an outline of a future poem. A skeleton if you will. It ...

Hahaha. this is so cute! I love it :D! The simple basic rhyming works with the whole hide and seek theme. I never would have done something like that. Nice!

You had a great start. it was unique and caught my attention. the last three stanza's though were weak and didn't fit in with the first three. I would either ...

The title is a little bland. the poem itself is more a thought bubble than a poem to me. Its very simple with no real structure. No flow, or rhythm. ...

This is a really unique poem, with a detailed choice of language and for that reason it is great. However it confused me, because it's meaning is not all that ...

It's basic, yes, but beside that I like the style that it is written in. It is not like some of your other poems I have read and that is ...

Okay, I understand that this is a light-hearted and, I am guessing nothing more than your thoughts on paper, because that's exactly what it seems like. There is no really ...

This poem is extremely basic. It doesn't really say anything other than a guy you loved left you with pain. It's like so many others only re-worded a bit. It ...

I know what this story is based on, I am guessing an hindu priest? That said I am not really sure what you are trying to say with this poem, ...

Focusing on everything else but the title is something I myself can relate to. But you should try to come up with one, it helps. And the point of view ...

I agree with the others, this sounds alot more like a thought bubble more than anything and it is a topic tackled many time before. But then again every topic ...

I am a bit confused by this poem myself. Like Amel I enjoy the line "Cradled by the earth, lit by the sun" but other wise the meaning alludes me ...