kinzygirl223

Wow that was really good short story. I was very interested. It made you feel warm when the kissed. Great job. You should write more.

Hmmmm. I dont think i get it. Sorry. It just doesn't work for me.

I thought it was pretty good. I thought it was a little awkward.

i liked it a lot. I thought it had good meaning. Try making it flow better though. It would be easier to read and understand that way.

I dont get it. ARe you sick then dead. I thought it was very hard to follow. Still enjoyable though

Wow. That was really cool I liked it. I found it a little hard to follow at times. Still fantastic.

Wow. That was really cool I liked it. I found it a little hard to follow at times. Still fantastic.

I thought that the topic was great. It really makes you think. Your descriptions were very good too. Very enjoyable

Hey please post a message i want to know what you think even though its not finished yet. Please do

Good story. I agree, a little graphic. Still good though. I think the tecnique was really good. It was never confusing, even though you were jumping back and forth. Entertainment. ...

I love this story and your sequil. I love your word choice. Please review some of my writing im new.