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Re: Guardian's Oath
Wow that was really good short story. I was very interested. It made you feel warm when the kissed. Great job. You should write more.
Dec 14, 2007 -
Re: Just random writing
Hmmmm. I dont think i get it. Sorry. It just doesn't work for me.
Dec 14, 2007 -
Re: All We Know
I thought it was pretty good. I thought it was a little awkward.
Dec 14, 2007 -
Re: Grandma
i liked it a lot. I thought it had good meaning. Try making it flow better though. It would be easier to read and understand that way.
Dec 13, 2007 -
Re: depressing
I dont get it. ARe you sick then dead. I thought it was very hard to follow. Still enjoyable though
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: Blood Song
Wow. That was really cool I liked it. I found it a little hard to follow at times. Still fantastic.
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: Blood Song
Wow. That was really cool I liked it. I found it a little hard to follow at times. Still fantastic.
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: Time
I thought that the topic was great. It really makes you think. Your descriptions were very good too. Very enjoyable
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: My new story
Hey please post a message i want to know what you think even though its not finished yet. Please do
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: Break-Up.
Good story. I agree, a little graphic. Still good though. I think the tecnique was really good. It was never confusing, even though you were jumping back and forth. Entertainment. ...
Dec 11, 2007 -
Re: I could talk to you forever
I love this story and your sequil. I love your word choice. Please review some of my writing im new.
Dec 11, 2007