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Hey. Gone by Michael Grant was really good. But if you want, have a look at the maximum ride series. The first is called The Angel Experiment. Also, there is ...

Hey. I loved this poem. I'm sorry, but someone has to say it. This poem was kinda cheesy! But I really like t. It was creative, and not many people ...

Hey, It was a really good poem. It is well written, but I would look at changing the 'me' to 'myself'. But other than that, I think it was good. ...

Hey, I was looking at the comment you left me and decided I will have a look at you story. I'm glad I did. It was really good. It is ...

It is really good. I like the use of the burnt hole, and how it need to be sealed. And I agree, it does make me think about what I ...

Thanks for the input. I'm glad that it is liked. About the proverb comment, I was actually writing it to use as a bible or something in a book like ...

It is really good. It makes you think about all you have written. Just one thing. 'They may of stopped me from fleeing' Did you mean to say They may ...