kingofeli

This story is good, but I feel like there's something missing. Maybe you could elaborate on why the father left? It just feels like this is more bare bones than ...

Hey there, this is Ricky here to give you a review on your novel! Please take all of this with a grain of salt, as this is only my opinion. ...

Well, it's certainly been a while since I've read something with a big "twist" like that, that left me actually wanting more or wasn't totally cliche! I really like how ...

This is...actually pretty funny. And one of the best 10 reasons lists I've read on the website. Not really surprising though, considering that you're the creator of the website so ...

So when I come back to the site, the first thing I decide to read is one of your poems. And honestly, I couldn't have made a better choice. Your ...

I've read the third part to this but nothing else, so I'm glad for the backstory, premature though it may be. Sometimes you need to write a novel and skip ...

While I enjoy the plot of this story, I did notice several mistakes in capitalization, spacing, and grammar. You must remember that every time someone new begins talking, a new ...

Is this the only thing that should be here? I'm kind of confused. Perhaps you just forgot to paste the rest of it in here? Just so you know, as ...

Wow, this made me laugh and totally reflects my feelings on certain songs! It also fit really well with the original song, it didn't seem forced or out of place. ...

To answer the author's note: I don't think it's too much like a Hunger Games information moment. There's enough action between the dialogue so that we understand what's going on, ...

Honestly? I'm going to go ahead and say that this is terrible. If this were being judged on a scale of 1 to 10, I'll give it a 2, only ...

Well, you asked kindly for a review so here I am! Since I haven't read much of your story, I'm going to focus mostly on structure, grammar, vocabulary, and spelling! ...

This is a beautifully written story, something that really looks like it was written by a professional. I feel like it should be more than just a short story, though; ...

Wow. I'm really in to social justice and whatnot, and I'm really happy to see this piece out there. As a huge advocator for the end of ableism, it's so ...

Short, yet sweet and powerful, I enjoyed this poem. They keep on improving, as to be expected from you, and I'm glad that I get to watch as your works ...