kimithy

hmmm good song but the chorus boys will be boys as girls will be girls confuses me. work on that my advice to good song writing is... 1. have a ...

all together this is a good poem i like it. but what i dont like is how you have copyied Roses are red, Violets are blue, You have my heart, ...

personally this bored me... i am really confused by the first verse. and none of it made sence. it had no emotion and no passion. im not being mean and ...

i like this poem its effective and meaning full. great job :D :elephant: