killkrusha69

First of all very good song and idea of the theme. It was interesting. Also you dont have to tell us if something is the "verse, chorus, ending" I tink ...

Only thing what bothered me in the lyrics was: When we first met (First met) I didn't even know your name yet (Name yet) Im sorry but the words met ...

Well..I must disagree with the people that didnt like this song because of the use of the "F" word...I mean sure its not a bright word, but seriously this isnt ...

I like the idea of the song but when I look into the lyrics I like to see the philosophical truth (in simple words theme) in them. I like how ...

I like the idea but I cant say that this is a complete lyric. I mean why so short? You presented a great idea but not what it holds. If ...

First of all its too short so it feels as you just began reading a book you been waiting for and it is only 3 pages long... In good lyrics, ...

so I liked the use of words you ha and you described the pain pretty well. The details that you went into were really good. So keep up the good ...

It was pretty good. Just to let you know, that you do not have to add markings in the end since it’s a poem but it doesn’t matter. The rhymes ...

Yep basically agree with everything he said. I am not good in grammar but I didn’t see really bad mistakes. The story over all was 6/10 You had the action ...

I will finish reading chapter 2 a bit later. I loved the action, really great. Only thing I would like to ask is that you would show a bit more ...

Of being stuck in morning, I think it will be better if you add ' the morning' Other wise loved it. It was really good, I like how you took ...

Holy crap! That was awesome. Your writing skills were really good. You pretty much explained how any person would feel if they are running from something scary. I felt it, ...

Okay, this is my first review. Perhaps I am being of extreme, but the ending killed it. Like literally killed the whole thing. The beginning was really good, I loved ...