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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Shirley’s origin

    I think it reminded me most of the scary short stories "to tell in the dark" along those lines. I think it worked well!

    May 11
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: my heart beats only for you

    I never got around to writing a review for this but I reallllly like the edits you've made and I love the sentiment behind this. I am so happy for ...

    Mar 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Technology Re: Blank Blank Blank

    I was hoping this review wasn't too long xD I had a lot of fun thinking through the poem and trying to gather some helpful information! I'm so glad this ...

    Mar 3, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: raising dreams

    Thank you so much Hannah! I really appreciate your insights and how the third stanza could use some tweaking -- I always end up finding a single stanza that I ...

    Jul 24, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: partial-asterisms above us

    Thanks for reminding me about this poem !! : ) I will always appreciate your lovely review.

    Jul 11, 2023
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Read my newer works instead, okay.

    i had a strong urge to add onto the likes so my day is good c:

    Dec 15, 2022
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Father's don't just love every now and then

    ah congratulations on getting married. i am so sincerely happy for you

    Feb 13, 2022
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Father's don't just love every now and then

    Reading over this again, I remember when I first had written this review. I%u2019m really hoping that you%u2019ve been hanging in there.

    Feb 12, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you believe in the power of new beginnings

    Thank you for the review!

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you believe in the power of new beginnings

    Thank you so much for the review!

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you believe in the power of new beginnings

    Thank you so much for the review!

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Honorine's Revenge

    You're welcome! Oh, that makes more sense. I was really wondering how he had that many kids XD

    Sep 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens Re: do chickens worry about tomorrow

    Aha I never responded, but I wanted to say that I love knowing what the original meanings of poems are. I can totally see the message reflecting on your own ...

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Crowded Mountain (1)

    Aha thanks for the review! Those questions are fair, and I hope to be able to get more information/world info in the next section over. I'm glad you're interested :D

    Sep 5, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Crowded Mountain (1)

    Thank you so much for the review! I can definitely see where the naming is a little quick, and while there isn%u2019t as much plot going on. This might have ...

    Sep 4, 2020


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein