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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pretence

    Hello fellow YWS member! This was very interesting to read. I like how all of your stanzas seem uniform compared to each other; you kept a nice pattern of four ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Death has arrived

    Hey there! You got a good, little prologue here that really drew my attention! This was written pretty harshly and rawly, but I liked it. I like how your sentences ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Word of Advice

    Wow... I really love this, how inspiring your words are. You got a great poem right there! I like all the aspects of this poem, with the different stanzas and ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Summer

    This is a very interesting start to a book! I have to say you are getting me very worried for Jessica! I really like how you write, with a good ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Up The Spine

    *Gasps* Man... what a story you got there! You're a very talented writer! I nearly screamed in a classroom filled with kids when I read this. Okay, once I can ...

    Sep 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yours

    Wow... I love poetry so much, especially when it is so well written like this poem is! I loved how your heart is all of these different animals, even some ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Why is she crying?

    Wah~ This story made me sniff in despair... Her friends better be kind to her otherwise I will hunt them down!!! I liked this story a lot, because, yeah, everyone ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Matt on His Seventeenth

    Hey! Good poem! I like how well-written and thoughtful this is! This was really cute, and made me feel both happy and sad, especially the sixth stanza when you wrote ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: When Humans Kill

    Wow... This was really interesting to read. I liked the shortness of it, and the feelings that you incorporated into it were really pronounced. I have a feeling I know ...

    Sep 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Magic Glasses

    Hello there~ Wow, I really liked this story! So cute! You wrote really well, with an extensive vocabulary and the description of Evan meeting Jennette really touched my heart. There ...

    Sep 12, 2014


I'm tired of books having villains who are just villains for no reason.
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