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Re: Pretence
Hello fellow YWS member! This was very interesting to read. I like how all of your stanzas seem uniform compared to each other; you kept a nice pattern of four ...
Sep 18, 2014 -
Re: Death has arrived
Hey there! You got a good, little prologue here that really drew my attention! This was written pretty harshly and rawly, but I liked it. I like how your sentences ...
Sep 18, 2014 -
Re: A Word of Advice
Wow... I really love this, how inspiring your words are. You got a great poem right there! I like all the aspects of this poem, with the different stanzas and ...
Sep 18, 2014 -
Re: The Summer
This is a very interesting start to a book! I have to say you are getting me very worried for Jessica! I really like how you write, with a good ...
Sep 18, 2014 -
Re: Up The Spine
*Gasps* Man... what a story you got there! You're a very talented writer! I nearly screamed in a classroom filled with kids when I read this. Okay, once I can ...
Sep 17, 2014 -
Re: Yours
Wow... I love poetry so much, especially when it is so well written like this poem is! I loved how your heart is all of these different animals, even some ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Why is she crying?
Wah~ This story made me sniff in despair... Her friends better be kind to her otherwise I will hunt them down!!! I liked this story a lot, because, yeah, everyone ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: For Matt on His Seventeenth
Hey! Good poem! I like how well-written and thoughtful this is! This was really cute, and made me feel both happy and sad, especially the sixth stanza when you wrote ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: When Humans Kill
Wow... This was really interesting to read. I liked the shortness of it, and the feelings that you incorporated into it were really pronounced. I have a feeling I know ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: Magic Glasses
Hello there~ Wow, I really liked this story! So cute! You wrote really well, with an extensive vocabulary and the description of Evan meeting Jennette really touched my heart. There ...
Sep 12, 2014
