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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pretence

    Hello fellow YWS member! This was very interesting to read. I like how all of your stanzas seem uniform compared to each other; you kept a nice pattern of four ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Death has arrived

    Hey there! You got a good, little prologue here that really drew my attention! This was written pretty harshly and rawly, but I liked it. I like how your sentences ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Word of Advice

    Wow... I really love this, how inspiring your words are. You got a great poem right there! I like all the aspects of this poem, with the different stanzas and ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Summer

    This is a very interesting start to a book! I have to say you are getting me very worried for Jessica! I really like how you write, with a good ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Up The Spine

    *Gasps* Man... what a story you got there! You're a very talented writer! I nearly screamed in a classroom filled with kids when I read this. Okay, once I can ...

    Sep 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yours

    Wow... I love poetry so much, especially when it is so well written like this poem is! I loved how your heart is all of these different animals, even some ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Why is she crying?

    Wah~ This story made me sniff in despair... Her friends better be kind to her otherwise I will hunt them down!!! I liked this story a lot, because, yeah, everyone ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Matt on His Seventeenth

    Hey! Good poem! I like how well-written and thoughtful this is! This was really cute, and made me feel both happy and sad, especially the sixth stanza when you wrote ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: When Humans Kill

    Wow... This was really interesting to read. I liked the shortness of it, and the feelings that you incorporated into it were really pronounced. I have a feeling I know ...

    Sep 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Magic Glasses

    Hello there~ Wow, I really liked this story! So cute! You wrote really well, with an extensive vocabulary and the description of Evan meeting Jennette really touched my heart. There ...

    Sep 12, 2014


I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.
— Dr. Seuss