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Hi! I wanted to say a few things about this work. I think a reviewer on the first chapter of this recommended to include personal experiences and thoughts, which I ...

Hi! I’d like to first say welcome to YWS; I hope you enjoy it on here. Secondly, congratulations on writing this much - this is a huge amount of text. ...

Hey! This review is coming from Team Tomatoes! Let's see. I liked your first parody but I think this one is better. Probably because I like the idea of putting ...

Hi! This review is coming to you from Team Tomato! I made sure to read the first chapter so I hope I have a good idea of what's going on ...

Hey there! Let’s see. I like seeing different interpretations of how magic is, so this sparked some interest. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! First off, I kind of ...

Hey there! Well, I definitely wasn’t expecting a chapter from Yusse! Interesting. I’m curious as to how many different views you’re going to have in this story. Two of three ...

Hey there again! So, can I just say that I always crack up when characters point out clichés? I just love having that instant little connection with the reader at ...

Hey there! I’m glad you updated this! And I will get to chapter eight hopefully tomorrow. My first impression is that I’m a little confused. Everyone’s personalities seem to have ...

Hey there! I was excited to see this up, so thanks! My first thoughts are that this is a nice follow-up chapter. Since the first established an eventual arrival of ...

Hey there! So, I’ve been meaning to review this for a couple of days now, but I think today is as good as any other. (More like tonight, but whatever.) ...

Hello again! I got excited when I saw this in the Green Room! I’m digging this fic so much. Let’s see. I like the background on Hero, cause I’m always ...

Hello again Radrook! My first thoughts are that this is interesting and actually kind of funny. I like things with irony if I can manage to detect it, which I’m ...

Hey there! Hppy belated welcome to YWS! So, I finally finished reading this, and wow it’s decently long. That’s impressive, but unfortunately, the length of this is probably turning off ...

Hey there! Since I reviewed the prologue, I figured that I should check out the first chapter, as well! A few things pop out at me here. First off, I ...

Hey there! First off, I like a classic fantasy story, so I’d love to be able to delve deeper into a new one. However, there’s a few things I don’t ...