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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Summers that Mourn

    Hello there. Popping to give you some type of feedback that everyone has earned by publishing a work on here. Even if this is coming over a decade later. First ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In My Way

    Hello there. I'm here to give you some feedback that is very long in coming, but at least it's here finally. First off, I think that opening this story with ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Out of Sight, Still in mind.

    Hello there! I'm here to give you a much needed and deserved review that's coming over a decade late. First off, I like that this story has at least an ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: True Calling

    Hello there. I'm here to give you a much-deserved review even if it's over a decade past due! First off, I haven't read the Thoroughbred series, so if I'm commenting ...

    Sep 11, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fast Food

    Hello there. Just wanted to drop off some much needed and deserved feedback, even if this is over a decade in coming! First off, I think that the opening paragraph ...

    Sep 11, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Falling

    Hello there! Everyone deserves a review, even if it's a decade-plus long wait, so here I am. First off, I think that the viewpoint this story is set in throws ...

    Sep 11, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Letters of Hope

    Hello there. Just wanted to give a little feedback on this even if it's from fourteen years ago. Since another great user is helping out poets, I decided to help ...

    Sep 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The demon maiden chapter five

    Hi there Oxara! Just wanted to give some feedback on this chapter. First off, the demon portion of this seems interesting enough, and it sounds like the main character is ...

    Sep 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Percy Jackson fan fic (title in works) Part 6

    Hi there! Just wanted to give you a little feedback on this story. First off, I think the narration of this falls a little flat, in the sense of not ...

    Sep 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Does Dragon Meat Even Taste Good? - 3 (LMS)

    Hi there! Just wanted to give you some feedback on this chapter. First off, this was pretty funny. The idea of dragons going to restaurants is different, so that certainly ...

    Sep 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 1 + Prologue

    Hey there! Just popping in to give you some feedback. First off, this is a decently large chunk of text, when compared to at least chapter two. That's fine, but ...

    Sep 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Never-ending Cycle: Chapters 1-6

    Hi there! Just wanted to pop in and give you some feedback. First off, I think that this is an impressive amount of words, but I think the length very ...

    Sep 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: In the Hands of Six 1.4

    Hi there Omnom! Finally back to give you some feedback. First off, I find it funny that Dr. Strange is all "must follow the rules" because that would have made ...

    Sep 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: Own My Soul - Chapter Three

    Hey there Scarlett! I went back and read the other parts of this story, so hopefully, this review makes sense. For starters, I like the new/old characters in this chapter. ...

    Sep 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Stella Magenta Book 1 3.2

    Hi Tucker! Popping in to give you a quick rogue Review Day review! I skimmed the last chapter, but haven't read the rest! I do recall seeing peeps of this ...

    Aug 26, 2018


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