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Re: Calumet (1)
Hey there Elinor! Popping in to try to give you a decent review on this. Starting Off: I think this is a promising start to a classical, cute story of ...
Nov 21, 2018 -
Re: Connection - 15
Hey fortis. First off, this chapter's opening hits so hard, especially after reading the next chapter, ugh. I think that Shandi and the crew leaving sets this novel at an ...
Oct 23, 2018 -
Re: Marble Lungs / Draft two / Chapter one
Hi Oliver. This is very long - but I hope this is helpful. "Are you sure you and her will be okay while we're gone?" I think that this is ...
Oct 18, 2018 -
Re: Connection - 13
Hey, there fortis. I'm all caught up on this story, so I feel like I can finally give you a review! I think that as a transitory chapter, especially after ...
Oct 11, 2018 -
Re: Which One is Mine?
Hi there! Popping in to boot this out of the Green Room. First Thoughts: This is pretty chaotic, and the code mistype adds to that as well, I think. I'd ...
Oct 2, 2018 -
Re: Frozen Honor: Chapter 1- The Reunion
Hello there. Let's see. For like a first start to a story, I'll try to go over the first paragraph in depth, then the rest of the story in more ...
Oct 1, 2018 -
Re: Birds of War (revised)
Hello there. Popping in to give one last review for RevMo, and to give a deserved second review. I think that by this being in the first person, this kind ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: So Many Lost Ones - III
Hey, there manilla! Popping in to give a review on this work of yours. I went over the other parts of this, so I hope I didn't miss anything! Let's ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The Equator in Zhulong [Second Box + 3.1]
Hey there Pompadour. Figured I should help get this out of the Green Room on this lovely Review Day. To start, that opening scene felt very eerie indeed, but that ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Solo Qui (Only Here)
Hello there. This is my fiftieth review of RevMo, which I was not expecting to finish at all. Anyway, this review is very late, but at least it's here now. ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: Little Lies
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's very late in its arrival, but it's here now. First off, I think you should have given yourself more time ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: I Scare Myself...
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that missed its flight and ended up very far from this story. First off, I think that the poems do not ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: the softest sigh
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed its stop thirteen years ago. First off, I feel that the blocky paragraphs, especially the third one, ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: The Human Side of Things
Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review, even if it's landing rather late. First off, I guess pixie/fairy stories all have the same roots since there are ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: Jerry
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that missed their 11 o'clock train years ago. First off, I think this is too short to be a short story, ...
Sep 19, 2018
