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  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Calumet (1)

    Hey there Elinor! Popping in to try to give you a decent review on this. Starting Off: I think this is a promising start to a classical, cute story of ...

    Nov 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Connection - 15

    Hey fortis. First off, this chapter's opening hits so hard, especially after reading the next chapter, ugh. I think that Shandi and the crew leaving sets this novel at an ...

    Oct 23, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Marble Lungs / Draft two / Chapter one

    Hi Oliver. This is very long - but I hope this is helpful. "Are you sure you and her will be okay while we're gone?" I think that this is ...

    Oct 18, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Connection - 13

    Hey, there fortis. I'm all caught up on this story, so I feel like I can finally give you a review! I think that as a transitory chapter, especially after ...

    Oct 11, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Which One is Mine?

    Hi there! Popping in to boot this out of the Green Room. First Thoughts: This is pretty chaotic, and the code mistype adds to that as well, I think. I'd ...

    Oct 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Frozen Honor: Chapter 1- The Reunion

    Hello there. Let's see. For like a first start to a story, I'll try to go over the first paragraph in depth, then the rest of the story in more ...

    Oct 1, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Birds of War (revised)

    Hello there. Popping in to give one last review for RevMo, and to give a deserved second review. I think that by this being in the first person, this kind ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: So Many Lost Ones - III

    Hey, there manilla! Popping in to give a review on this work of yours. I went over the other parts of this, so I hope I didn't miss anything! Let's ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Equator in Zhulong [Second Box + 3.1]

    Hey there Pompadour. Figured I should help get this out of the Green Room on this lovely Review Day. To start, that opening scene felt very eerie indeed, but that ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Solo Qui (Only Here)

    Hello there. This is my fiftieth review of RevMo, which I was not expecting to finish at all. Anyway, this review is very late, but at least it's here now. ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Little Lies

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's very late in its arrival, but it's here now. First off, I think you should have given yourself more time ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: I Scare Myself...

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that missed its flight and ended up very far from this story. First off, I think that the poems do not ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: the softest sigh

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed its stop thirteen years ago. First off, I feel that the blocky paragraphs, especially the third one, ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Human Side of Things

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review, even if it's landing rather late. First off, I guess pixie/fairy stories all have the same roots since there are ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Jerry

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that missed their 11 o'clock train years ago. First off, I think this is too short to be a short story, ...

    Sep 19, 2018


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