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Re: Where did I go wrong ? Diary entries from a lost child 1985
Hello there. I've noticed there are a few works of yours that all don't have two reviews in a short amount of time. I've decided to attempt at going through ...
Jan 18, 2019 -
Re: Connection - 17 (everyone needs grief counselling)
Hello there! Popping on by to finally get back into this story! My school was a certain pain that I am very grateful to be free of for at least ...
Dec 21, 2018 -
Re: Delta - 14.2
Hello there again. Popping back in. Let's see. I like the continuation of Jud's view here, as it's kind of neat to see him focus on other characters and other ...
Dec 16, 2018 -
Re: Little Sister Chapter Two(reboot)
Hi there! This has been in the Green Room for far too long, so I thought I would pop by and give it a second review. To start, I'd mark ...
Dec 11, 2018 -
Re: As Much as Night Follows Daylight
Write a poetry review where you use three different poetic devices to structure your review topics. Hello there Lightsong! Popping by to give you a review and boot you out ...
Dec 9, 2018 -
Re: The Story of all time
Hello there, thought I would pop by and give you a review on this work of yours. Starting off, I think that this is an interesting idea, especially in the ...
Dec 9, 2018 -
Re: Joker Missed - Finally! - Chapter 8
Hello there. Popping by to give you a review and get this work out of the Green Room. I haven't read the other chapters in this, but let's see where ...
Dec 9, 2018 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 15 (LMS IV)
Okay, I figured I would help you boot this out of the Green Room, even if I've only really read a few parts of this whole story. Intro So, I ...
Dec 9, 2018 -
Re: Connection - 16
Hi there! Took me a while, but hopefully, I can catch up to at least your posts in the forums! So, my thoughts on this chapter were that this was ...
Dec 8, 2018 -
Re: Better than nicotine
For this review, I'm going to be using the General Prose Review Template, as given by the Better Review Bureau found here. Greeting Hello there kostia! This has been in ...
Dec 8, 2018 -
Re: Delta - 14.1
Alright, onto the next part, I guess. So, what I like about this section is that the different views carry such a distinct weight that it’s really enjoyable to go ...
Dec 5, 2018 -
Re: Delta - 13.3
Hello there again. I'm gonna try to boot all of these chapters out of the Green Room over the next few days when I have time. It's a nice break ...
Dec 4, 2018 -
Re: Delta - 13.2
Hiya there Lizz. Finally got caught up on this so I'm gonna be trying to review this. I think what works here is that Harry is such a complicated person ...
Dec 4, 2018 -
Re: Lost Friend
Hello there! Popping by to give you a review on this story of yours. So, I think what's working against you here is formatting. As it stands, the huge chunks ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: You Are Not a Failure
Hello there. I wanted to pop by and give you a quick review of this work of yours. First off, the topic is an interesting one and something that is ...
Dec 2, 2018
