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Re: The Clock of Daniel Washer Prologue
Your welcome, cheap motels are something I know all too well. In Cleveland Ohio where I live they are everywhere, so I could probably name a few off the top ...
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Re: Chapter One: A Cycle Begins
Your welcome, looking forward to it. Welcome to YWS by the way. Feel free to ask if you don't understand something about the site, I know it can be confusing ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 38 Part 2
What's the LMS contest?
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Re: Crazy Little Love Story (6) What Kind Of Popstar Are You?
Yup, I worked as a waited a couple times. Although no famous people came where I have worked. But I have gotten plenty of crappy tips, and I know i'm ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Crazy Little Love Story (6) What Kind Of Popstar Are You?
Thank you you too. Yeah he isn't the only rich celeb who does that either. Anyone who has worked a waiter type job before would know this, it's better to ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: The Dragon and the Princess: Chap. 1
Yeah I figured that, happy to help. :) By the way sorry for the generally crummy review, it's just one of those crummy days we all have from time to ...
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Re: Coda - Prologue
Leed blinked and got stabbed and kicked off a cliff.
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Souls (Red Velvet Chapter 2)
Yeah I know, my mom is the same. On my birthday or a teachers birthday during elementary school she would send me with cookies. I always got asked if she ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Souls (Red Velvet Chapter 2)
I live near a bakery and a few dairy queen restaurants. I can get one later. :)
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Souls (Red Velvet Chapter 2)
I don't know if I had lemon, definitely haven't had caramel chocolate.
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Terra Gate Chapter One The Meeting
I might even do a prequel type backstory too this eventually.
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Souls (Red Velvet Chapter 2)
Ice cream cake. Then red velvet, then angel food cake. Looking forward to it.
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 6
The only time you should capitalize somethings is when it begins a sentence, is a name, or a place. For example Riley, Jackson, Pauline, those are names and would be ...
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Re: Terra Gate Chapter One The Meeting
Was going to add it at the top in a single small paragraph, but it just didn't feel like it fit very well. It will be explained in the next ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Terra Gate Chapter One The Meeting
No offense taken. :) It was helpful, commas are my weak area of punctuating. This one was written before I started to improve what little bit I have since joining, ...
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