kevin25a

Well that was an awesome chapter and awesome accident. I'm looking forward to your next chapter, your story is getting better and better. I almost want to ask if it's ...

Well that was good and bad. It's a really good chapter, but kind of sad the mother just keeps getting more and more stressed. I feel kind of bad for ...

This was awesome but had a few typos. That was when the elevator started to pick of speed. You mean pick up speed. I figured that any teenager not braindead ...

I am still curious if it was a trick coin to be honest. :) I noticed you still said "caused suicide" not sure if it was an accident or not. ...

Well that was really average, kind of didn't live up to the middle chapters. It was good to finally get old issues put to rest, but everything about that final ...

Well as much as I did like this chapter and the plot twist, it just seems like you're delaying the conclusion. I liked how you did this chapter, but that's ...

This was really good, I hope you continue it. I really look forward to a possible continuation. It has a great plot, realistic characters, realistic historical ranks. This is all ...

Dun dun dun, well I saw that coming. I look forward to your next chapter. I'm curious about that key, considering there aren't many ways a person could have a ...

Oh this is getting good, really loving your crime novel you got going on. It also brings to perspective, people will generally choose their own life before others. It's more ...

Ok so she must be death, or his daughter anyway. That or she has the shinigami eyes from deathnote. Stop trying to die again, that one made me laugh. It's ...

I kind of see where the title came from although I didn't expect this. That's good though, I love surprises. I do hope the reason for the title name becomes ...

Oooh those stupid whisps. Really loved it like usual, and luckily for me I can review the next one right away. Hopefully those whisps get what's coming to them eventually. ...

This is really good, and I definitely look forward to your story. It's really good, and the plot is pretty solid for a starting point too. I'm curious about the ...

This chapter was really good and I hope you can squeeze one more out tonight. It's getting good and ready for an awesome conclusion. What exactly was highwhisker's position or ...

That was pretty awesome, that's what I think. Not sure why you chose a reptilian, but it's a nice twist from the original myth. Depending on how you use it ...