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This was very good, I liked it a lot! I have to say though that I thought the "spell" of the whole piece was ruined somewhat when the dialogue started ...

This was so good! You want to know how good it was? SO good that even though it wasn't spaced out at all, I read the whole thing. :D Which ...

Okay. First off, there were way too many grammar and spelling mistakes. I think most of them were mentioned in previous reviews, so I won't go through them all (I ...

I like this but not quite as much as the first one. I felt that the opening monologue by Thompson was a bit too dramatic and angry and cliche, maybe ...

It was a bit short but it doesn't necessarily have to be made any longer. Although it might be cool if you did write a longer play about the life ...

Well Suzanne covered most of my thoughts...I thought it was wayyyyy too short. I could kind of see it being like an episode for a show on the Disney Channel ...

I liked how this piece flowed. Very well-written. I wasn't too sure I liked the ending sentence though. It seems a bit too long and somehow a little clunky; can't ...

Aww! That is really sweet! Um...excuse me for a moment...I have something in my eye.... :wink: I really liked this a lot! My only problem was that it seemed to ...

Hi Lakegirls! Okay. I liked your speech as an essay, but it didn't seem to flow very well as a speech. I'm sure you'll take care of that later, though, ...

I thought this was a good beginning but there wasn't much of a steady flow to it. It seemed that all the sentences were about the same length, and they ...

I really liked this story a lot. And I mean a lot! It was very well written, had excellent voice, and, although the main character was cynical and pessimistic, it ...

*Applauds* Wow Jenna, that was very well-written! I knew absolutely nothing about the subject before, and you explained it quite clearly. Props on that! Most of the grammatical mistakes I ...

I liked this poem but I'm sorry to say I didn't really understand it...I guess I'm just not "deep enough"... :D I think if you added another stanza or two ...

Oh wow, this was hysterical. I laughed out loud multiple times. That just made my day. :D Especially loved the part about Snow White going back to the dwarves and ...

Wow, Louisa! Bravo! *applauds* I really enjoyed this chapter! The descriptions of the circus were extremely creepy, you really made Pierre out to be a hateful character, which is difficult ...