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Re: Road to Nowhere (Chapter Two)
hahahah i'll definitely write more! thanks for reading! :D
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Book tiltes/names!
3 & 4!
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: The Trees of My Woods
Thanks for all the help. I know it wasn't the best. I'll definitely take what all of you said into consideration :) Also chiaro0090, I did the hyphen at the ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Love
This was very good! I liked how you kept your poem short and sweet. Longer poems, in my opinon, tend to be a little boring. I liked how you made ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: 5 Haiku
Very nice poems! I love how each of them are describing the wonders of nature. I find nature very interesting which is why I loved reading your poems so much! ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Never able to Surrender
Loved every second it. You used great descriptive language and that made it easier for me to understand what was going on. I was drawn in by the first couple ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Bunny Fluffy
What? Was this supposed to be funny? Or serious? Hm..
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: A necklace
Amazing! It's almost like a story itself. You have such amazing talent. Keep up the great work!
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Down In The Deep
Amazing. You have quite the talent. I can almost picture everything because it all seems so real with the way you described everything. Keep up the good work, tydecker777.
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 3 (unknown title)
You had me at the first sentence! What a great talent you have. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your work.
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Irene
Love how you wrote a poem about the storm! Very clever idea and I would've never thought to do something like this. Great use of descriptive words. The poem really ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: *Mute* Pending
Great! These lyrics really relate to me because there are times when I have things to say, but I can't figure out how to. I loved it.
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Basmati
Great! I loved how much you described everything. It really makes the little details seem bigger and more realistic. Keep up the good work.
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Hey Confetti. I loved every second of this. I don't very often read a story in the point of view of an animal. You had some great discriptions in this; ...
Aug 29, 2011
