kaylamarie004

I strongly agree with your statement here. Poems don't always have to be long or long enough to understand. Two lines can speak more then 100 lines. As long as ...

I love your creativity. Your ideas and choice of words to explain what your talking about was average but understandable. Slight improvements can make a big difference in writers. I ...

Outstanding! You had my interest from the first line to the middle. I was wondering myself if the world really tilts. I think that you should eliminate some stanza's that ...

I love this poem. Not only does it sounds good, but it's true. All the time people are addicted to wrong instead of right. Run away from things that shouldn't ...

I must say, this isn't my favorite because it needs alot of work. The first stanza Black bird, why do you cry? In my head, i wounder why. I think ...

I love this poem. It's outstanding and I love how you express the way you feel and put it into words that rhyme without changing the topic in which your ...

I really enjoy how you use fantastic vocabulary choice. However, I had trouble figuring out where you were getting at, what you were trying to say, and what you wanted ...

This is a terrific story. However, it seemed as though everything came too fast. You lost me when he was describing Abby, and then all of a sudden that was ...