kayay123

Btw way for those who dont know and im sure the author might add something, but this is the beginning of sorta a short chapter book that doesnt really have ...

I loved it! This was an amazing piece! So well written and portrayed. I could feel the pain and suffering. I could feel all the characters feelings and you did ...

This captured my attention immediately. I really loved the beginning but the end is what really effected me. It showed me how the girl felt, maybe bitter and angry. I ...

Okay i am not so good at the grammer part so i will leave that to someone else. However I did notice the bit between Levi and Lia. It makes ...

I really loved reading this! this is a great thing to write about. That poor girl regretted something she did along with losing something else! I am so sorry for ...

This piece is so amazing! I did find it a bit hard to understand in the beginning but that may be because I am a fast reader. The writing was ...

The plot line was extrememly interesting and very good. It was interesting enough to keep me wanting to read more. I enjoyed all the details that you put in to ...

I have to say this is one of the coolest things I have ever read. The story is interesting enough to make you want to keep reading. The details are ...

I loved how she died. You did really well with that part as well with John's death. That was the interesting part. I however agree that the "falling into a ...

I found it to be really cool. I thought you had really good description without too many details. The plot was very good and it looked like you put a ...