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  • War is a cruel thing

    This is my first attempt at a writing. Hope you like it. He came to her door on a bright, crisp, Sunday morning. The trees were just starting to bud ...

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  • With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)

    I'm new at the whole poetry thing, but I hope you like it Love LostYou shove me away, my back against a wallI have no one to turn to, though ...

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  • Feeling Unknown

    Kinda new to this, but please I want your opinion!She was in intense pain. She doubled over as it spread through her body. Her heart felt as if it were ...

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  • Feeling Unknown (edidited version)

    Hopefully this is a bit better but please critique it as best as you canI watched her through golden eyes as she came into my forest. I was perched on ...

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  • My DreamWorld

    I had created my dreamworld one night while laying in bed. I closed my eye and I pictured a lake, a crystal clear lake. Surrounding the lake were oak trees ...

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  • Forever Lost

    Dawn comes, another day begunThe birds begin a song already sungYour eyes, your smile, your stuck in my mindI search for another, you all that I findI look for you ...

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  • Death of All Men

    Do you see the rising tideAs the sun begins to dimCan you hear the lullabyThe sirens begin to swimCan you hear their melodythat sweet but deadly tunedo you hear the ...

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  • Am I

    Poem a friend wrote and I need your opinion on it"Am I?"Am I free yet?It sure doesn't feel that way.I'm always glancing at the clock,Dreading the end of the I ...

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  • He will Never Leave Me

    "How are you?" they ask, so I lieAnd turn away so they won't see me cry.I run to my room and slam the door.The thing that comforted me is no ...

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  • The Secret Keeper

    Chapter 1-The Boy With Green EyesI flinched.The whip’s sharp snap rang in my ears even after it sounded. Terrified at the prospect of meeting the hostile glares of the fellow ...

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  • Secret Keeper Chapter 2

    The dream bothered me throughout breakfast. I thought about it as I nibbled on a biscuit smothered with an exotic type of marmalade found only in Crystallia. I thought about ...

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  • Secret Keeper Chapter 3

    Chapter 3-Listening to Guitar MusicThe Mistress raised her scepter and I closed my eyes, bracing myself for what was about to come. I felt the crystal of the scepter lightly ...

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  • The Girl Below

    Her footsteps were unheard as she walked down the path that led to a raised rock in the middle of the deep lake. Even her tears were silent as they ...

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  • The Sacrifice

    She hummed happily to herself as she drove the blue sedan up to her little brothers old brick elementary school. She turned off the radio before shutting off the sputtering ...

    4 min read
  • Kidnapped

    Rough Draft, i need to know if people are interested before I continue the storyHow did this happen? I shook my head, unable to comprehend what had happened to me. ...

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