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this is pretty interesting.......corrupting a nursery rhyme... Anyways, I like how it rhymed and all,but I guess I don't really like it that much...... but that's my opinion! just don't ...

Wow. I like that. That's all I can say :D. I like that. I'm really weird in some ways. Like talking to the moon and trees. But this one blows ...

I love it! It has a great beginning: Introducing us to Miranda's family. I love where she met Jesus too. It's absolutely amazing!!!!! I love it! I love it, I ...

AMAZING!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!! STUPENDOUS!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot believe someone could write just like you!!!! There is only two, tiny weeny winy flaws: 1. Chapter Name is too long, like the first chapter

I agree, the name of the chapter is way too long, but I absolutely LOVE the story. I've never read anything about vampires before, but I bet this might be ...

awesome. stunning. a true love story, i might be able to say. i love it. I love Somie and the little baby the couple had. I love everything about this ...

this was a pretty good story. however, i wonder how this was put in the action and adventure section. I guess you tried to explain the relationships some people have ...

i'm loving this. Just Because I'm a Christian. I'm a Christian to, for that fact. Wow, you truly express what Christianity is really about. It's not just about turning the ...

this was a pretty good story. i like how you put so many descriptive words, but there are a few things to point out to you. Also, the air carried ...

wow. that's all i can muster for you, mamallama. This is the best story i have ever read!!!!!! great job. I love the descriptive words and the metaphors and similes. ...

great job. I liked how you organized things into different stanzas, but I guess there might be some typos, and you should probably proofread your work. For example: I’ve saw ...

Wow, that IS pretty good. But, I think I might have to agree with my friend, Caily, it's sort of awkward with no punctuation in the beginning. But that's okay ...

this is a pretty good poem. i know you said it would be short, but i didn't expect just one stanza. I think it rhymed pretty well, but you should ...

hey Cailey!!! this was an awesome poem. I love poems that rhyme. i just luv this verse: There were no walls or roof, just snow; It was the North Pole, ...

This poem, "When Will It End?" is very good. It shows the feeling in the author's view. I'd say this is a very good poem. It clearly shows the symptoms ...