kathy45662

LOl I wrote this a LONG time ago and thanks for the help! i won't spoil it for you that way you'll leave feedback on the other chapters. Once the ...

lol. Thanks for the help. No most of what I write is short stories about romance, and this kind of came to me out of the blue. I wrote the ...

Um...nice but not much to look at to critique. Is there more to come? autum should be Autumn

Good job. Sorry I don't have much input but I like this opening. I see great potential and I like your style of writing.

I really like the idea. Your title drug me in like a bug to a light zapper. Interesting creatures to have together. Once you make corrections, I look forward to ...

You did a great job on the poem! I love the 9 syllabal pattern. Great job. I didn't see any grammar errors but I'm not an expert! Nothing wrong stood ...

I noticed this was posted a LONG time ago but I am pretty new so I will still review what I think. I love it! Yes, a few corrections already ...

Yea it probably does. Hopefully not Pirates of the Caribbean later either :O That's part of the novel problem I need to change things around so it's not so familiar ...

That's cool! Glad you enjoyed it! I had problems wondering where to end the story at. I am beginnin to post my long novel that is so messed up. I ...

That's cool, thanks. I will work on adding some of that information in. I'm thinking maybe Jared will be described in a note from Grace to Secret Admirer and she ...

This is a beautiful piece. You did a great job capturing the imagery and it is a very touching work.

I had both parents growing up, but I can try to imagine what it would be like with only one. I've lost close family members before (both in laws) and ...

Just beautiful! Keep up the awesome work! I'm going to follow you! Mwahaha. I like the imagery and the flow. I think everyone has already touched on the problems they ...

Thanks for the review! I have changed the novel some and indentent the notes and italicized them so I can see them easier. Thanks for the review I will look ...

Um...wow. Violent but I like the descriptions and visualization of the lyrics. I'd like to hear it as a song thou It gives me the impression it should be lyrics ...