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Okay, this is of no offence to you or your skills as a writer, which, from what I can see, are really good, but I found this boring. Don't you ...

Okay, first off, I don't normally read stuff like this. You know, real world stuff. Calm me a nerd, but I like to read fantasy fiction and all that other ...

I'm so confused with this one. Is it a poem? Is it a chapter of a novel? Is it a chapter poem? Poemception. That said. it's only because I was ...

Tommy, Wow. Just wow. This is so straight to the point and concise and small and wow. I applaud this. Reading through it, I had so many questions in my ...

(I have no idea what to call you so I'm going to call you 567) 567, I actually have a thing for prologues. I like how they open the story ...

The first thing I feel I have to say is I love the dialogue between the two characters - it's so funny and real. It's not so formal that it ...

I liked how you managed to write this from a picture prompt - quite cool. But I did feel like there wasn't that much detail? You speak about how women ...

First off, thank you for informing me about the next piece in your work ;) much appreciated. I like it. Like seriously, I like this book. The idea behind it ...

I normally hate reading first person novels but, because this was posted in Fantasy Novels, I thought I'd give it a go and wow am I glad I did. This ...

Before I say anything else, I guess I should tell you that I haven't even read the other parts to your story so this is me only commenting on this ...

I think the first word that came to mind when I read the first bit was 'cliche *yawn*' but I was proven wrong as I read on. At first, I ...

I thought this was pretty emotional and, seeing as how I hate anything emotional, I was surprised that I found myself wanting to read on, albeit only a little. The ...

Okay, so I'm not going to do an intensive review (as there's been one done above me and I agree with every point), I do have some points to make. ...

This was good, it intrigued me and I don't really get intrigued much. I have a few qualms though: My first one is the fact that you've used quotation marks ...

This was a good read. I don't normally read stuff from the first person point of view because I feel that a third person point of view gives the writer ...