kaolin

as the others have sead it is a little weard...but it's as funny as he(dubble hocky sticks) ... ( LL ) >i dont get it. >me nither. >what the hell ...

I do think i will chane Sora to somthing else... but i dont know what to change it to. if aneyone has a idea , let me know -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

one problom... Oliver is NOT Rika's brother just to clear that up and as i sead i will TRY to put sejestions in the final copy

Thank for the idea's!! I will try to put this in my final copy A: no they we only going to the outer ring station ( Jupiter station ) and ...

as I thought... I will change the name Yuudai to somthing better... soon as for the crewmater ... yes they are cowerds and yes they are unnamed *most of them* ...

just as a question ... who would like to see the first fue lines of my new story

to all : i ask you to stop tormenting me about how bad my spelling and grammer is it is starting to get RELLY ANOYING thank you

thanks Imp ,and yes this one is all mine , no other searies prompted me to write this ( i don't think... ) P.S i need some names for the ...

as i sead befor * there will be no more of this from me * however i am planing a totaly difrent searies to be released starting in 2 weeks ...

as i sead before i know its bad but so is complaining about what another person dose if it dosent affect you , if you dont like it dont read ...

yes i know i have no style. deal with it yes i know i cant spell. deal with it dont worry by the way things look now im not continuing ...

im working on it ...just give me time...

oh my god... that was funny...HAHAHAHAHAHAHA