juulman

Thank you for the kind words and also welcome to YWS!

It was a joy to read I am looking forward to what you do with it next

Thank you for the review! The allusion to Ozymandias was planned, I am happy someone caught it. I adore that poem so much

Nice to hear you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the welcome back and the extensive review! The robin's egg was meant to serve the greater metaphor of letting go, as a mother bird also has to let ...

Thanks for the quick reply, Maybe my interpretation was a bit too rigid then. I still think you should clarify the "our siblings" line in the poem like you did ...

Thank you for the encouragement!

Thank you for the Review! I was actually quite unsure about the rhythm, as it switches quite frequently throughout the poem. I am glad it doesn't read as disjointed

Thanks for the kind words!

Thanks for the extensive review

Also in my review I forgot to mention how you use vagueness to invite the reader to conjure up what they think is the most dreadful scenario in many places ...

Thank you for this comprehensive review, its really nice to see that the themes I intended came across so clearly! Also its always nice to see someone else who is ...

Glad to hear you enjoyed it

Carcosa has been on my mind ever since I read The King in Yellow by Robert W. Chambers, which is quite the interesting collection of short stories for anyone interested. ...