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Re: To my father...
Wow!! I absolutely love this!! oh my gosh!! It's really beautiful. I love the part that says "You think that I am callous, Heartless, cruel and cold. But I do ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: In A Year
I think this is really interesting=] Very cool. I think it has a nice flow. The part that says "Death approaches closer For a friend of mine But which one? ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: For those few days
it's sooo beatiful!! Definitely one of my absolute favorites of yours! You're so good at this!!!!!!!!! hehe there were some spelling that could be corrected and heck I don't really ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: If I Were To Lay To Rest
I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really awesome!!! I love the last part!!!! And I love God so much, so that part was really really good! =]] It's cool, even though it's ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Last Summer
This is so cool! It totally reminds of summer!! I really like the part that says "slowly the sun surrenders to a diamond studded sky." and also the whole ending ...
Jan 26, 2009