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Re: just eat
your welcome!
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Re: i wish
anytime!
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: Tree Girl: Chapter 3
Thank you! I will edit that.
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Re: Tree Girl Chapter 2
Thanks! That is a good suggestion.
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Tree Girl
Thanks for the suggestions!
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Tree Girl: Chapter 3
Your reviews are so helpful! I noticed that I kept switching tenses and I tried to fix all of them, but maybe I didn't get them all. Thank you so ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Tree Girl Chapter 2
Thank you for those critiques! They are all a good idea. I will fix them right now. I love how people on YWS know how to critique with out being ...
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Re: Tree Girl
Thank you for those critiques! The reason that the first chapter is so short is I was just setting up the story, but I will do the comma thing. Thank ...
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Re: the after - 1/2
I loved it. It was really an emotional story, and I hope that there is a sequel to it. I loved how realistic it was, how people feel when they ...
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Re: I am Mari (Chapter 1)
Thanks!
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Re: Insignificant
I love how you wrote this poem! It is like a haiku, sort of, but longer. It is short, and simple, yet it explains so much! It captures the beauty ...
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Re: Live Like Legends
I can almost completely relate to this poem! I want to be remembered, we want things to be the way we should be, I want to see everything, if something ...
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Re: I am Mari (Chapter 1)
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Dec 3, 2020
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Re: I am Mari (Chapter 1)
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Dec 3, 2020
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Re: ;-;
Thanks for the welcome!
Dec 3, 2020