juniordame

You made perfect sense! Thank you so much for that, I'm glad that someone else got it.

Actually it's a little bit of both, and then some. I kind of went all over the place with this, so sorry if it was a little hard to understand ...

I love the last stanza. Don't know why... Love the imagery. That's all I can say. Love it.

I like the idea behind this. But I think some of the lines have too many syllables, and the next line after have too little. It's not very balanced. It's ...

Hmmm. I like it but i dont really get it. It has a good flow and every thing. I don't know. Is it meant for the reader to imagine what ...

Thanks for that! It was really helpful. :D

I usually stay away from valentine poems, but this is pretty clever. I like the parallel of the first and last line. Some lines are a little stilted, but overall ...

:lol: Love this! It made me smile, haha. Nice one. :D