juniordame

Hi there, I really like this poem as well, the only thing I can say is that the line: I try to speak but I find I’m unable. I personally ...

Hi there, haven't been to yws for so long, but I just wanted to browse around, and your title caught my eye. I think Fand already covered all the critiquing ...

I loved this too, and I agree about the capitalizations. I didn't really get why there's a grey white dove though. Does it symbolize something specific? Monogamy? Freedom? Purity? All ...

This sort of reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back. I wasn't very proud of it. Having said that, I like the suspense here, the reader is ...

I also didn't appreciate the two-line format nor the flow, but I really liked the imagery that you depicted. It seemed a little cliched at first, but I grew to ...

Hey, I really like this. I like the imagery. I love the last stanza, it just makes the whole idea come together, that it was really just about musings in ...

Wow. I actually really like this. Hi btw, I'm a newbie. Lol. Anyway, I like the urgency. I love the third stanza: lipstick powder the spotlight will hide me the ...