joec

ha i like the way youre alll oh no im gonna die and then hey buddy whats up good job i still think you could go into a little more ...

It's heavy, it's cold, and it's uncomfortable. I feel guilty holding it, and I feel like a murderer. I'm holding a gun, and I just got out of school. Breathing ...

Okay... If I were you, I would probably had written this in third person, getting rid of all the 'I's', to start with. The story is very cramped, and you ...

This was an unusual piece, I must say. Although, that does not mean that I did not like it. It was quite good, albeit a bit confusing. The story left ...