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Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 2
Boom! I hath returned. Time to do another review for you. Time for round two. I will probably have more stuff to add based on the flow from one chapter ...
Aug 26, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 1
Yo. Jimmy here Time for me to do another review (Finally. I've been pretty lax recently). I thought I would just drop on by and throw my two cents in ...
Aug 23, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Prologue
Yo. Here's Jimmy! I have been in a reviewing mood lately so I decided to stop on by and see if I could help ya out a little. (Pardon my ...
Aug 21, 2017 -
Re: The Battle For New Earth Chapter Two
Yo. Here's Jimmy. Alrighty-oh. Time for another one of my patented and trademarked underwhelming reviews to grace this site. Prepare yourself for my unparalleled mediocracy! Just a few things in ...
Aug 18, 2017 -
Re: Titled: My Holler Keen Tan (June 4th)
God Bless. I cannot tell you how much I enjoy roses are red poems. Not gonna lie, yours was a little more romantic than the ones I usually come across/come ...
Jun 12, 2017 -
Re: The Abel and Cain Institution of Higher Learning (Ch. 1-2)
Yo. Thought I would pop in a try to do a review. To be honest, I saw all the warning tags and was like "Yes! Another person who writes gritty ...
Jun 12, 2017 -
Re: Idea for Novel
Yo. You asked for a review and decided to fly right in and see if I can help. (Didn't even take a plane or nothing. Just flew right in. I ...
Jun 11, 2017 -
Re: Book of Hestia: Ch.2
Jimss here Yo. I'm Jimss and I do unexceptional reviews for exceptional people. I have cursed you with my appearance in another of my attempts to write something reminiscent of ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Sneak Peak of First Story as a Freelance Writer!!
Welcome to YWS. I saw you were new and thought I'd introduce myself. I am Jim, a remarkably unexceptional writer, and I stumbled across your work and decided that it ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: ii. Beck and Call
Jim here. Greetings from Jim, the unexceptional writer and I'm here to give a, more than likely, subpar review in the attempt to help ya out with your chapter here. ...
May 17, 2017 -
Re: Sword Quest of Enigmatic Souls Ch 1: A Boy At War
Jim here. Hello Hello. I am Jim, the unexceptional writer, here to do another lackluster review aimed at trying, ostensibly, to make this piece of literature as best as possible. ...
May 17, 2017 -
Re: Runaway - Chapter One
Jim here, Yo. Alright, it has been a while since I've done a review, so I will open with my usual disclaimer. I am here for your work, not for ...
May 17, 2017 -
Re: Sanctuary: Diversion
Jimss here Greetings and Salutations. My name is Jimss, but you can call me Jim (everyone else does). I am here to do a little review of your work. I ...
Apr 7, 2017 -
Re: The Scourge Called Death
Jimss here Hey, there scribbleinks! I'm jimss, and I decided to stroll on in and take a gander at your work. OK, before I get into the nitty gritty stuff, ...
Mar 3, 2017 -
Re: Still Stone - two. (part two.)
Jimss here Hey, Quill. I was strolling through stories that I had reviewed before to see if any had published more and low and behold, I see part two! I ...
Mar 1, 2017
