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  • Just a Traitor

    We both said we always wanted to be friendsBut I knew, deep down,I could never see you as anythingBut a traitorYou said you loved meAs I gently broke your heartBut ...

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  • The Boy Who

    This is one of my first attempts at could use LOTS of work...please review!The boy who messed around with me,instead of solving equations.Who chirped like a fire alarm,Who wiggled his ...

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  • Pain

    Hey! This is a poem on the Pain of Loving Someone...Please Review! It desperately needs it!I’m not sure what to think…ConfusingI wish I knew what this meantBemusingYou said you loved ...

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