jessig833

Hey This was a really good first chapter. I loved everything about it. This seems like something I can really get into. I'm interested in finding out where they are. ...

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Well I really like this story. I'm not going to go into detail about a few errors because the people below already pointed them out. I am however going to ...

I Like this story a kelp me tuned in the hole time I was reading ...I hope to see more of your work. see you around. **********jessig833***********

Wow........I love this story its a great story I like the plot a lot....I hope to see more of your work You should read some of my things sometime a ...

I like it seems like its going to be a good story but i would like to know what clans he,s from that would have been somthing to tell when ...

I liked it cant wait to see more..

Yea i think they are right animals have a good sense of smell he would have been following his scent from the begin and it could be more descriptive but ...