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Re: Statue of a Young Woman
Yup! I've read all of them (except for a couple of the later series w/ the Roman camp...) They were pretty good, but I read them a while ago.
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: A Nerd's Lament
Actually, I know a couple of nerds who would be horrified to get a C... maybe they wouldn't cry bucketloads, but they'd berate themselves pretty badly. Just a thought...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: March Sunlight
Thank you for reading my poem. I'm definitely glad for YWS. From the feedback I'm getting, I've found that the first line is confusing. I meant that there were a ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: March Sunlight
Thanks for your review! ...I'm finding that my wording in the first line is confusing to some people; thank you for pointing that out.
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: March Sunlight
Thanks so much for your feedback! ...I did "feel" there was a problem in those lines before I posted the poem... but I was in a hurry and I didn't ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Statue of a Young Woman
Thank you for your feedback and for taking the time to read my poem! :)
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Statue of a Young Woman
Thanks for your feedback! I definitely agree with what you pointed out... still thinking about what to change, though. (While I was writing the poem, I tried to find a ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Statue of a Young Woman
Thanks so much for your thoughts on the poem. Your questions about her are great... I don't know if I'll edit the poem to include some of the answers, thought... ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Statue of a Young Woman
Thanks so much for the feedback! (The line-spacing thing _is_ annoying, isn't it? I had to type ctl shift so many times to keep the formatting uniform!)
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: March Sunlight
Thanks!
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Statue of a Young Woman
Thanks for the review! I've been trying to get this poem perfectly clear and create a precise image here; your thoughts will help. I've already rewritten this poem about five ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: The Girl In The Clearing
I hope you decide to continue with this story and others!
Aug 10, 2014 -
Re: colors of insomnia
Ugh, I meant "here." Oops.
Aug 10, 2014
