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Re: Forbidden Love; Chapter 1.
I liked it. I think you should make it longer and add more detail. But other than that it was great. I think you hsould describe Trent more. Like his ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: The Notebook
Wow! This was good. Are you writing more? I loved how you explained the characters! I didn't see any thing wrong. But hey. I stink at the kind of stuff. ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: A Bit Too Late
Wow! I really like this better. I think you should deffintley write more. You have a good start of a book right now! And if you ever do right it ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: The Unknown
I really like this story!! I can't wait to read more! Aha. your a good writer. And i didn't notice any mistakes, but i stink at that! Hope you write ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Mary the Slave girl
I like this! Are you adding more?
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (15... and a half?)
That is so cute! I hope your writing more. Wait thats a dumb question to ask. you wouldn't write 15 chapters and then stopped. MAn I am such a blonde. ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (9)
Anya seems to be not friendly. I can't believe that Kristie talks to her, or the other way around. It wasn't a boring chapter. I love your writing=]. can't wait ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (1)
I love it! But you do say He alot. I would like to know the girls name. And maybe a little description...like her hair, eye color, what kind of clothes ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Abuse
Wow! That was a really good story! Every thing flowed perfectly together=]. I didn't see any mistakes. Your a good writer. I was wondering do you have any more stories? ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Sisterly Love
I saw nothing wrong with your dialogue.But I loved your story. I was just wondering, are you writing more? I hope you are, I want to find out about James ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: 'Til Summer Comes Around Chapters Four and Five
I really like this story! I hope your writing more. There was nothing wrong. i like your writing style. --Jessie.
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: I Promise But I Lie (2)
This was a tad confusing. But I still like it!! Well hope you write more. --Jessie.
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 7
I love this story. Are you writing more? I hope you are. Well, bye.. Jessiee.
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 6
I really like it! Hope you write more. You have some spelling mistakes. And some punctuation missing. But i still LOVE it. hope you write more=]... --Jessie
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: How to Live with Her
Is this suppose to be a poem? Like I don't understand it. Can you help me understand it, Abbi.? Like what does it mean? Well, I hope you can tell ...
Aug 2, 2009