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Hi there Sci! I had to read this twice as at first it was a little confusing to read - but I think that in a way it works. The ...

Hi xemoxwriterx I'm a little confused! I take it this is part of something much bigger that you have wrote, I'm pretty sure that you can edit this to add ...

I had to comment on this as banana splits are my most favourite things in the world! And you have done them justice well done! The only bit that didn't ...

Ello there :) here is my review: I agree with what the others have said, you must put what the characters are doing otherwise it does not make sense, for ...

Got your message so here is my review :) The glittery mess line did make sense to me, simply because you were talking about masks and fancy dress - this ...

Hello there :D The imagery in this is beautiful, it was so vivid and it worked so well! The mystery and pondering also worked very well, I liked how the ...

Hi there :) First off, I have to admit that I'm not really too fond of this - it didn't really say anything to me, I didn't wuite get the ...

Sorry if I am being a bit stupid but is this just a short story or an extract from something you are working from? If it is just a short ...

Hi there :) I must say I really enjoyed this poem! This isn’t your home of orient, where bamboo shoots and orchids flourish, and the perfume of Eden still lingers. ...

Hello! (This is my first ever review so I do apologise if I don't do it correctly :( ) Anyway! To start with I agree with Lilymoore with the punctuation ...