jeremyeverett

Thank you :) And welcome to the writing world! Looking forward to seeing you around.

Thank you for the review :) Tried the rhythm change to see if it brings the message across better, getting reviews on the impression really helps. I believe I will ...

I explain the terms a bit in your other work, so I hope it'd make better sense here afterwards too. That said, if you'd like to have a talk about ...

Will definitely try to properly use the music terms next time :). Just for your heads up, when compared to your terms, then it is Stanza = Verse, Verse = ...

Glad to be of help :) I imagined "such" in "it%u2019s just a human thing". When I imagine singing "it's just such a human thing" with a slight shake of ...

Thank you for the review! Oh, they definitely are all explained :) Time willing, I'd be able to post the related chapters soon and I hope it'd be of good ...

Thank you for your review :). I can definitely elaborate on the rhyme scheme without spoiling much. I wanted to find out how people would react to/see the changes between ...

Thank you for the opinion! :) I wondered how people would take the change in how the stanza is delivered, because as the first stanza begins, there's somebody at the ...

Thank you for the review and sharing your impression :) Might be interesting how readers would take this poem once they read the novel text before and after it, would ...