jenni321

oh i read that! it was one of the worst, most uninteresting books i've ever read. seriously. Who the heck devotes their time, money,and energy into writing a story about ...

Wow, that was really inspiring. i noticed that in the rhyme scheme didn't match in a few lines, but it was really great. Love the message, i too, hate math ...

I love your poem! there are a few puncuation, capitalization, and spelling errors, but the message is really deep and sweet. keep posting, i'd love to read more! jenni321

hey! I just joined too, but welcome anyways! your poem is really good. descriptive, and elegant. I can totally picture it in my mind. great job, keep writing!

It's random, but in that utterly funny way. It'd be good for a children's book on poetry, too. At last! a poem that isn't like every single other poem!!! Jenni321

The poem itself is really good, not sure what it's about though... i have it on the tip of my tongue, nope, don't have it. good job, though. Jenni321

Great job! it's hard to write long poems like that, but you pulled it off quite well. Tell me when the next part comes out! jenni321

It's really good, but there are some lines that have too many syllables, it kinda messes up the beat. but other than that, it's pretty good. Keep writing! jenni321