jemming17

Hey there! Honestly, I personally love poems about animals, particularly cats. I will say I do like the repetition you use by using "she" instead of switching back and forth ...

Thank you for a very useful review!

Thanks!

Thank you for the review. This is my first little novel so these critiques will really help me! :)

It's still really good and practice makes perfect! :) I'm not the best at writing in general so haha.

welcome :)

I think this was, no, is a great piece of work. Especially for the prompt in the club. :) The verses move very freely and it just fits together, like ...

:) haa I try not to critique to hard.

Thank you so much! I hope to actually write some in the future, but school is a main priority!

My bad @mmebatman112 :) accept my apologies.

I wrote something like this at one point, and I now things get hard. But thinking through positive thoughts helps a lot.

Thank you for revising this for me, I had did this maybe a year ago, and just copy and pasted. I will go back and fix the grammatical errors. I ...

This is so full of that feeling of love, you can really sense it in this piece. Have you did other pieces like this? I'm new here, but I'd definitely ...

This is really pretty, I like the type of writing you do, with the spaces in it.