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Thanks Ink, I'm stilll working on iy and your comments helped. That last line that you said was contradictory and confusing was a typo! It was supposed to say "But ...

No reviews? :(

Thankyou all! This means alot. :)

Thankyou all! I will work on it with your ideas.

Someone... anyone....? Re-review it?

Well this story I am hoping is going to be a two part story but the way the second one is going there may be three. Hehe ;) I know ...

I am currently working on an edited version. A better one in my opinion.

Yeah sorry for the format of it! I copied and pasted it! :P

Thanks guys! Snoink, for "Would you care to share it with me?' I am trying to imply that I have a secret and am wanting to share it because I ...

Ok so I just edited it, I don't know if any of you will look back on this... but I fixed it. :)

Yeah, that sort of is the way it comes across. At least that is sort of what I got out of it.

Yeah, I know that hahaha. The thing was though that it was a school assignment and it is a quotation story. It is supposed to be composed of quotations, that ...

Thanks Jane! :) BlackThought, It was a school assignment and we were not allowed to use the word "said" I quite like the detail different words give but yes I ...

Okay Isha, so you sort of, kind of, used a lime name in here. You know know what I mean :wink: haha

Oh and by the way my favorite part, I feel sorry for you. I feel sorry for my best friend, the one that you chose over me. Because while you ...