jedigeek

that was really good. Good imagery and every thing I like the concept, sort of an after they died romeo and juliet? but yeah it was cute and sweet.If only ...

Oh lord! this has permenently changed my views on bunnies. Haahaa dont know how I am gonna sleep at my cousins house when I know that those bunnies outside verywell ...

ThIs is a really good story, I really liked it There is a just a few capitalization Mistake though and some grammatical stuff We both tumbled to the ground, I ...

This does not really sound like a story to me you didn't use adjective or figurative language. If you want to submit this as a story add emotion so the ...

This isn't grammatical stuff or spelling it's just to make it flow better a a story my thoughts are in red !! Rose felt her heart break into a million ...

Way to add a twist at the end of the story!! That was good although the first few paragraphs reminded me of a poem because you put "she was blind" ...

That was good I really like it. I think when you said I walked out of my two story house p you could just put I walked out of my ...

Well I definately liked it I it had a good topic but, I got confused because your main character was hearing the screams of the dying and the vampires and ...

Hey! So I would love to review this, but this is a bit much to review. So I would advise you to break this up into three or so different ...

hmm... that vwas cool i liked how it personifies that pet peeve that every one has that little thing that annoys them like me its havin the radio turned down ...

You really made a clear vision of how edmund felt and the story would help any one under stand why he did it . I never liked my name. What ...